Talk:Stolen Honor: Wounds That Never Heal

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Hi Neo! I'll leave the decision up to you here, but want to mention that I prefer the empty headers for two reasons. One, it provides space for somebody to fill in the missing information. Two, your alternative statement "the movie does not offer any hard evidence that Kerry's testimony led to a deterioration in prisoner treatment, or that it lengthened the conflict" can only be verified by somebody who has seen the movie. I haven't. Have you? Is this statement true? By my empty section style, we're only saying that the article, not the movie, provides no evidence; and we are providing space for any evidence which may be contributed. Peace,
--Maynard 23:27, 17 Oct 2004 (EDT)

Hi Maynard, thanks for that... i was just concerned that the empty headings looked like a rhetorical point, even if that was not the intention. And because of that, i was worried that some people might not read any further. I'll try modifying my alternative statement to address your comments. Let me know what you think! Cheers, --Neoconned 23:58, 17 Oct 2004 (EDT)